This is our first draft of our magazine review. It includes a picture of the main character, Paul, a still from the short film and the production company logo. It also has a bold title, release date information and the article itself. However, after recieving feedback, we have decided to make several changes to that layout. This is because our own personal opinions mixed with the feedback of others concluded that the layout didn't look much like a magazine. This is because, to start with, magazine layouts seldom include a background any other colour than white, so this will be one of the changes we make. Another issue we picked up on was the images involved. The image of Jacob (Paul) includes him wearing an outfit than is not seen in the film, so this may confuse readers. The production company logo is also unneccessarily large and covers up part of the title, which will cause a reader, who does not already know the title, confusion. There is also little emphasis on the supporting characters, so this will be added in to the article.
Once these changes have been made a newer version will be uploaded.
-KW
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